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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 6, 2010 18:50:02 GMT -6
Okay guys, since most of us have finished our main characters, we now need to go onto the next step- which is makin' a plot! Any ideas?
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 6, 2010 19:34:29 GMT -6
Here's my idea:
Several moons ago, the leader Whitestar has led Cedarclan with pride, and very risky decisions. Some of those decisions payed off, but a lot of them have not. In fact, they lost some of their territory in the event of the last war. Many cats of Cedarclan support him- but some, do not. Some cats hate their leader so much- they'd do almost anything to get rid of him. Even murder. Yep, their is a conspiracy boiling in the Cedarclan camp. You've all heard the stories of past conspiracies- but none like this. What were to happen- if one were to succeed?
After Whitestar was lured out of camp, and murdered, the leader of the conspirator's group, a gray-black tomcat named Shadefur, is made deputy after Echorain takes over. With his new position, Shadefur convinces Echostar that Marshclan was behind Whitestar's murder. So, Cedarclan declares war on Marshclan at the next Gathering. Who will win?
What do you think?
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 6, 2010 19:38:36 GMT -6
Good Idea ^^ But battle, might be a little hard because none of us wants our cats to die :c
What about a plot for the outsiders though o3o
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Post by Skyla on Apr 6, 2010 19:40:22 GMT -6
No offence but that seems more a Cedarclan plot then a full on plot that includes Marshclan as well. Why don't we try to think of something that will affect both clans, like a big plot with a small number of side-plots?
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 6, 2010 19:40:26 GMT -6
We'll burn that bridge when we come to it. ^^
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 6, 2010 19:41:15 GMT -6
No offence but that seems more a Cedarclan plot then a full on plot that includes Marshclan as well. Why don't we try to think of something that will affect both clans, like a big plot with a small number of side-plots? There is that- but we could have another big plot goin' on in Marshclan as well. ;3
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Post by Darius on Apr 6, 2010 19:43:11 GMT -6
Outsiders could make a raid on the camps, both the clans blame each other for their deaths, since their dead clan mate's scent lingered with the passing outside. Full out fight. Outsiders watch contently. Bam.
... or something.
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Post by Skyla on Apr 6, 2010 19:45:02 GMT -6
True any ideas on what Marshclan could be facing? Oh and what about Starclan, what have they be doing anyway? Oh... I just got an idea.
What if the Medicine cats got a prophecy from Starclan that results in something huge that would affect both clans because the two main plots/problems with Cedarclan and Marshclan?
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 6, 2010 19:47:40 GMT -6
True any ideas on what Marshclan could be facing? Oh and what about Starclan, what have they be doing anyway? Oh... I just got an idea. What if the Medicine cats got a prophecy from Starclan that results in something huge that would affect both clans because the two main plots/problems with Cedarclan and Marshclan? Sounds Cool ^^ if we do that we would have to come up with a prophecy and stuff. And what about the outsiders...again :3
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Post by Skyla on Apr 6, 2010 19:52:34 GMT -6
True and I'd have to speak with Soul about the prophecy so we can come up with something, hopefully.
The rogues are also a cool idea.
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 6, 2010 19:57:41 GMT -6
What if the ned cats recieve a dream from Starclan...and shortly after rogues come into the clan and steal kits or something and the clans think the other did it...and war breaks out [though I dont exactly approve of the war idea]
very stupid idea I know xD
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Post by Skyla on Apr 6, 2010 20:04:00 GMT -6
Interesting idea. But do we even kits for them to steal? Maybe they could catnap(Kidnap but it's with cats so catnapping) the apprentices(This wouldn't include the Med cat apprentices because they are in seperate dens.) instead and hold them prisoner or something?
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 6, 2010 22:28:27 GMT -6
Interesting idea. But do we even kits for them to steal? Maybe they could catnap(Kidnap but it's with cats so catnapping) the apprentices(This wouldn't include the Med cat apprentices because they are in seperate dens.) instead and hold them prisoner or something? Yea, and we also would need a reason why they would steal the 'cats'. We could make pretend kits with a short bio for each of them because I dun think we have enough apprentices either.
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 7, 2010 5:50:55 GMT -6
Personally, I think we should leave the outsiders alone. I mean, evil rogues attacking in my opinion, is way overdone.
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 7, 2010 6:07:23 GMT -6
Personally, I think we should leave the outsiders alone. I mean, evil rogues attacking in my opinion, is way overdone. Okay Then o3o But it's not fair to leave the outsider with no plot :[
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Post by Swift on Apr 7, 2010 14:45:17 GMT -6
I think Ed's idea with CedarClan is good :3. But we do need to have something with MarshClan, too x3. I don't have any ideas as of right now though xD.
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 7, 2010 15:12:16 GMT -6
Well, I also think it'd be nice to have a little free-roaming.
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Post by icyxdusk on Apr 7, 2010 16:57:12 GMT -6
Hm, how about something like an attack from different animals that can kill cats, such as bears, badgers, foxes, etc. ? Pathetic, I know. DX
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Post by Icey-kun on Apr 7, 2010 17:51:01 GMT -6
Yea, but that has happened in the original already but it could work o3o
EDIT: This directed at Ice btw xD
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Post by →Bex-chan ! on Apr 12, 2010 17:33:56 GMT -6
Okay, we seriously need to get back to plot-making.
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